Deadly Flight

First poem attempt. Failed miserably. Hey at least you can tell it's written by me, but i still can't figure out if that's a good thing or not. I'm posting it because in about 20 years time i want to read it and make fun of how bad it is. Anywhooooo here it is =D

Once happy
Flying high,
Now so scared
That I might die.

A shadow upon me
So dark and sly
Watching me as I
Blow dry.

You were quite polite
Not interupting,
One might say
You were even
Out hunting.

Hunting?What for
When you only
Had dinner at four!

Now obviously hungry
You're aggressive
But really,
It's not like i'm
A digestive!

You reach
I fly
You smash
I cry.

I flew again
Lights went out
I got covered
By a cloud?

Then you crushed me
And i died
My insides
And my head
Were underneath
My leg.

Now i died
Gone to bug heaven
It is quite cool,
So thanks, to you.
You bastard.

By Ruru.

This was for english class... teacher's comment was "Interesting..". He obviously doesn't get my sense of humour. His loss. =)